At precisely
More or less.
But today was different.
It was not
You step out, and what do you see?
You strain to listen to the morning birds, but all you get is a hoot. And a handful of chirps.
One day, the clocks will dominate. Gears and coils grind together in industrial rebellion. A conspiracy, indeed, against the whole of cosmopolitan humanity, who reach for every second and millisecond and audaciously take clocks for granted.
There is only one way to fix this. And that is to fool the clocks into thinking that they are right.
The problem is, that one way compromises reality.
Once the deed is done, you will no longer be living in the same time-frame as anybody. In fact, nobody will be sharing the same time-frame.
You may now be living in somebody else’s past, or in somebody else’s future.
There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s past (he lives in everybody’s future).
There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s future (he lives in everybody’s past).
Consequently, the whole of humanity is affected by that one person living in everybody’s past, and the person living in everybody’s future is affected by the whole of humanity.
The thing is, you wouldn’t know. You would continue to live your life thinking that you are living in the present. You think everybody is living in the same present time-frame.
But really, you delude yourself too well.
Common folk wouldn’t be bothered, see. In their memory, there was a day of abnormal time registry, but afterwards they realize that their clocks were right all along. If their watches said
You tell this to your fellow inmates in the asylum. Their heads loll off in a vague response.
whoa. deep.
ReplyDeleteso far, nobody has fully understood what i was trying to say, even if i tried to (verbally).
ReplyDeleteoh well.
thanks for always commenting :3
it's strange how nagkakaparehas mga sinusulat natin. remember yung unreliable narrator thing? he was supposed to be locked in an asylum. hmmm. weird natin haha
ReplyDeleteanyway. yey, nagsulat ka na ng story with a deeper meaning! magpost ka nung what it means! haha don't leave us all (at least me) in mystery.
it's kind of hard for me to really explain what i wrote, and after chatting with you, i think it's a really good idea for you to post your interpretation here, since it really, really hit the spot:D
ReplyDeleteif you say so, haha um. hmmm, well ung nakuha ko was that time is something na hindi grasp-able. sobrang abstract, sobrang indefinable notion niya. like right now d mo alam if ur really in the RIGHT NOW moment of ur life. past present future--they're all overlapping "parts" of time
ReplyDeleteand watches/clocks dont really TELL the time parang, they're just there to tell u what time of the day it is pero they cant tell u if this is the past, present, or future.
even they can't tell the time. not really, not in the way that mattered.
wheeeee :D
ReplyDeleteouch! my head! >.<
ReplyDeleteexcellent. :D
ReplyDeletehahaha:D
ReplyDeletethankyoo, hannah:3
This is so symbolic. *o*
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There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s past (he lives in everybody’s future).
There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s future (he lives in everybody’s past).
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I am surprised how true this is, and you just interchanged two words!
And hey, the clocks have already dominated--stupid deadlines.
Other parts--I see no need for a visual intro, but I suppose it helps fool the reader to think he's reading a story but is actually coming across a declaration of theory, hahaha.
Yes, good work. The whole piece kept my interest awake 8D, mainly from the personification. I'm looking forward to more from you.
Oh, you got it!! XD I am so happy. I was actually thinking of starting this thing with the phrase.. 'This is a story in as much as this is a revelation...' or something like that. Hahaha. :3
ReplyDeleteBtw, an error was pointed out to me by mich!
ReplyDeleteThis part is edited, i sort of mixed up the 'person living in everybody's past' with the 'person living in everybody's future. o_o
I am really I amazed that you spotted that one, because I was expecting people to just breeze through that part haha.
Thanks :3
person with either the most advanced or the latest clock/timeline . . . lolz
ReplyDeletehah! that's a simple way to put it.. only, they all have separate realities. @_@
ReplyDeleteyupyup get that lolz
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