Friday, December 28, 2007

Conspiracy of Time

At precisely 7 AM, the digital clock bleeped. Though in actuality, there is not much to be said—millions of digital clocks bleep at precisely 7 AM.

More or less.

But today was different.
It was not
7 AM. Not precisely, not almost, not a few minutes after, not more, not less—it was totally, unforgivably, un-estimably not 7 AM.

You step out, and what do you see?

The moon, full and silver, is shining brightly in the spotted black sky. Odd, don’t you think? It’s 7 in the morning, after all, in an equatorial continent.

You strain to listen to the morning birds, but all you get is a hoot. And a handful of chirps.

Glancing at your watch, it said 9:30. You try to tap some sense into it, and it neatly clicks to 10:30. It is insanely counting hours by the second.
You do not know what to do. But really, you knew it was going to happen sooner or later.
 

One day, the clocks will dominate. Gears and coils grind together in industrial rebellion. A conspiracy, indeed, against the whole of cosmopolitan humanity, who reach for every second and millisecond and audaciously take clocks for granted.

There is only one way to fix this. And that is to fool the clocks into thinking that they are right.
The problem is, that one way compromises reality.

Once the deed is done, you will no longer be living in the same time-frame as anybody. In fact, nobody will be sharing the same time-frame.

You may now be living in somebody else’s past, or in somebody else’s future.
There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s past (he lives in everybody’s future).
There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s future (he lives in everybody’s past).
Consequently, the whole of humanity is affected by that one person living in everybody’s past, and the person living in everybody’s future is affected by the whole of humanity.

The thing is, you wouldn’t know. You would continue to live your life thinking that you are living in the present. You think everybody is living in the same present time-frame.
But really, you delude yourself too well.

It isn’t such a big abnormality anyway, just a major shift in the time-space continuum, is all.
Common folk wouldn’t be bothered, see. In their memory, there was a day of abnormal time registry, but afterwards they realize that their clocks were right all along. If their watches said
4:27, then it will be 4:27. Then they’d shake their heads and continue on existing, only they are ignorant of the fact that they now exist in a different plane.

Present time now becomes subjective.

You tell this to your fellow inmates in the asylum. Their heads loll off in a vague response.

15 comments:

  1. so far, nobody has fully understood what i was trying to say, even if i tried to (verbally).
    oh well.

    thanks for always commenting :3

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  2. it's strange how nagkakaparehas mga sinusulat natin. remember yung unreliable narrator thing? he was supposed to be locked in an asylum. hmmm. weird natin haha

    anyway. yey, nagsulat ka na ng story with a deeper meaning! magpost ka nung what it means! haha don't leave us all (at least me) in mystery.

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  3. it's kind of hard for me to really explain what i wrote, and after chatting with you, i think it's a really good idea for you to post your interpretation here, since it really, really hit the spot:D

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  4. if you say so, haha um. hmmm, well ung nakuha ko was that time is something na hindi grasp-able. sobrang abstract, sobrang indefinable notion niya. like right now d mo alam if ur really in the RIGHT NOW moment of ur life. past present future--they're all overlapping "parts" of time

    and watches/clocks dont really TELL the time parang, they're just there to tell u what time of the day it is pero they cant tell u if this is the past, present, or future.

    even they can't tell the time. not really, not in the way that mattered.

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  5. This is so symbolic. *o*
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    There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s past (he lives in everybody’s future).
    There is only one person who is not living in somebody else’s future (he lives in everybody’s past).
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    I am surprised how true this is, and you just interchanged two words!
    And hey, the clocks have already dominated--stupid deadlines.
    Other parts--I see no need for a visual intro, but I suppose it helps fool the reader to think he's reading a story but is actually coming across a declaration of theory, hahaha.
    Yes, good work. The whole piece kept my interest awake 8D, mainly from the personification. I'm looking forward to more from you.

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  6. Oh, you got it!! XD I am so happy. I was actually thinking of starting this thing with the phrase.. 'This is a story in as much as this is a revelation...' or something like that. Hahaha. :3

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  7. Btw, an error was pointed out to me by mich!
    This part is edited, i sort of mixed up the 'person living in everybody's past' with the 'person living in everybody's future. o_o

    I am really I amazed that you spotted that one, because I was expecting people to just breeze through that part haha.

    Thanks :3

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  8. person with either the most advanced or the latest clock/timeline . . . lolz

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  9. hah! that's a simple way to put it.. only, they all have separate realities. @_@

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