The sky's in love with you.
It must be.
Why else would it break into the brightest grin each time you greet it in the dawn?
I see it wink at you discreetly in the dark, its eyes shining brilliantly with a secret.
Can you feel it as it whirls around you in the wind? It howls for you in the night,
It searches for you while you close your eyes and dream of better days.
Tonight the sky thunders in anguish. Torrents cut the seas in blind rage.
It must have been something you said. The rains follow you and hope you feel the pain.
You don't, though. With your boots and your coat, it is too easy to forget.
The storm pours on.
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It reads like a psalm D: Anyway, there's still a verse after that, but it was awful, so now it's crumpled up somewhere. I wrote this last week, after listening to Herb Alpert's This Guy's In Love With You. Hehe, I heard it wrong.
Huy ang ganda, hahaha. Really. Feeling ko lang medyo nagkaka-break sa flow dun sa "You don't, though" part kasi masyado maikli after long sentences :D
ReplyDeleteYou think so? :3 Para sakin nice siya nung sinusulat ko..pero while I was typing it I was getting dubious (hence the scrapped paragraph) Haha. Thanks tho! It means a lot coming from you XDD
ReplyDeleteWonder how to fix the broken flow?
Make the flow smoother? Haha longer phrase? :D
ReplyDeleteI GOT YOU A HEIGHTS BOOK AND SIGNED IT, WAAHAHAHA. Wala lang, give it to you soon.
XDD
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